SHort DDR story I made up

chaos stepz · Trick Member Joined: 09 Apr 2004 Location: CT

Was bored so i made this story up using the name of some DDr songs in it:

....Jay was a person that never took life for granted. Even thought he was a high school drop out he tried to love his life to the fullest. One day he met a kind lady, her name was Sakura, she was very attractive and had freckles. She asked Jay, "Baby love me?," and he replied: "I do I do I do!" Then she disapeared into the night as though she never existed. Jay could only remember her last messege. He walked down the dark road and reached a dead end, with tears in his eyes he entered the dark black forest. He decided to clear his mind and relax, so he took a dive into a nearby river, it was so deep he almost drowned. he felt a wild rush of water hitting him, he was drifting away farther and farther downstream. As he look to the sky he saw two hands lifting him out of the water and on to dry land. A man had saved him, his name was Max. Jay thought he saw a healing vision when he was saved, maybe that was what max was. Before he left, Max gave Jay a bag. He told him that inside of it R3 magic potions and to use them when he is in serious trouble.

"you should be lovin the life u have, try to have some fun and take it easy" said Max.

"hey, B4U leave i would to thank you for saving me"
"no prob...said max.

the end

Mr_Blasty · Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 11:21 am Post subject:

uhhh ok

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ImKotarou · Basic Member Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Location: Not telling you

Thats funny

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Laharl · Trick Member Joined: 24 Jun 2004

What a touching story.

Maxx 999 · Trick Member Joined: 09 Jul 2004 Location: Las Vegas, NV

did he have a paranoia of sandstorms?
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XxFriedRicexX · Trick Member Joined: 15 Jun 2004 Location: Macon, GA

IM SO DIRTY AND FUNNY DONT U THINK LOL
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RadMooseKiller · Trick Member Joined: 09 Apr 2004 Location: Northeast Ohio

very creative.
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Lenoh · Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 8:41 pm Post subject:

This idea's been done before.

Hate to break it to you, bud.

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916 Roseville SUCKS · Trick Member Joined: 10 May 2004 Location: Roseville, CA

http://www.aaroninjapan.com/taren/insaneddrstory.doc
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CiboMatto · Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 1:10 pm Post subject:

That is so cute!! Tres kawaii! (Yeah, I know..total mix of languages, but I don't care

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Dark Chaos · Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 1:21 pm Post subject:

GACK!...too...many...PUNS!

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Chance - Matt · Trick Member Joined: 19 Jan 2004 Location: Danvers, MA

ok, it'd be cool if the story was actually well written and thought out or something. but the fact that you just wrote a paragraph searching for sentences to fit ddr songs in shows that the ddr community truly does not have a life beyond this arcade game cult. not dissing ddr at all...but come on.
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FreakinA · Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 3:08 pm Post subject:

Writing stories like these, truely pleases the DDRgod. Pretty nice though. i don't think I could have wrote somthing like that. I would have had to think too much. And that makes my head hurt. Badly. Things like these show the love for DD in the DDR community. Happy to see it!
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Redwngs13 · Trick Member Joined: 08 Feb 2004 Location: Hockeytown

Haha, i did something like that for an Away Message. Here it is...