DDR Fanfic I'm working on

RaveCat · Trick Member Joined: 26 May 2003 Location: MA

'The River of Tears Flows From My Pillow' Long title

I know
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1381942
Anyway, please read, review, lemme know what you think. It's still under work, but I think it is coming out good.

It focuses on Emi. It's a Drama.

If you don't like bad things happening to characters. I wouldn't readit. But it WILL end happy

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NW330 · Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 9:37 am Post subject:

I read that! I reviewed it actually too. I loved it.

青い衝動 · Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 9:54 am Post subject:

i only got thru the first 2 chapters and its really good so far n.n keep up the good work!
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Ceredigm · Trick Member Joined: 26 Jun 2002 Location: Raleigh, NC

I'm sorry, but I just couldn't bring myself to read it. The words DDR and fanfic shouldn't be in the same sentence.
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RaveCat · Trick Member Joined: 26 May 2003 Location: MA

Glad some people like it ^-^ I will keep working on it
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f train bang bang · Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 11:35 pm Post subject:

^_~ Of course i read it. Duh; rules of email correspondence dictate that i do thus.

Why do people hate my stuff is what I wanna know, and I wouldn't mind a response from someone else on FF.net *ahem*.

http://fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1374488
Kill me, for I have written slash between dear old Rage and Izam. I beg your commentry, since we're on the subject of fanfiction. Rave Cat, you can berate me for hijacking later.

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TeeHee! JP ONRY! · Trick Member Joined: 05 Apr 2003

Wow that's really good and interesting, your good at making stories, you keep me wanting more!!!

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RaveCat · Trick Member Joined: 26 May 2003 Location: MA

Wow! I honestly didn't think it was this good ^-^ Thank you all. I'll keep at it

and as for chal mot'ae: Don't worry about it...and you know I'll be reading your stuff when i finish this..and I'm sure I'll like it
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f train bang bang · Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2003 1:51 pm Post subject:

[S4U] Evo · Trick Member Joined: 21 Oct 2002 Location: El Paso, Tx

wow this is really good. Once i started reading it, i couldnt stop

i cant wait to read some more of it

you definitely have talent

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RaveCat · Trick Member Joined: 26 May 2003 Location: MA

I should have another chapter up tommorow

maybe 2 if i get inspired enough
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TeeHee! JP ONRY! · Trick Member Joined: 05 Apr 2003

*hoping you get inspired to make 2*

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ALL Skills Capped, ALL WSNMs Completed, ALL Unique Job Merits Completed
STR+5,CRIT+5,HP MAX
Maat's Cap:O Apocalypse:O Claustrum:O Kikoku:O X's Knife:O Rajas Ring:O !First LS To Kill Jailer of Love!

f train bang bang · Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 4:17 pm Post subject:

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1381942&chapter=5

He's got that 5th chapter up, peoples!

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Specialed098 · Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 4:29 pm Post subject:

Well, its no 10k commotion.... mainly because there are no pictures.
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RaveCat · Trick Member Joined: 26 May 2003 Location: MA

GuyMonkey · Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 4:48 pm Post subject:

I'll get to reading your fic in a sec, but I gotta say something first. Grrr on FF. I had an account there, but then when it went down for a little (I don't remember when) I didn't log in for a while. When it gets back up, turns out I forget my password. Grr...
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RaveCat · Trick Member Joined: 26 May 2003 Location: MA

-LoC- SkitZ® · Trick Member Joined: 10 Nov 2002 Location: Union, NJ

nice story line, and zuken's got an interesting role

the only thing i'm gonna suggest, is that the dialouge be a little more...eh, realistic, per se. the fact that you use their names so much in between friends seems kinda made up. but i'm no writer, just a thought.
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lol is you

GuyMonkey · Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 5:28 pm Post subject:

Read the fic, thought it was awesome. Although being a writer I do know that it can confuse readers if you don't use names often (comment on the guy above me's comment). And I've decided to make a new account on FF and start a new fic.

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RaveCat · Trick Member Joined: 26 May 2003 Location: MA

thank you GuyMonkey
for liking ym fic AND for backing me up on the names thing
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