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Kyrandian Trick Member
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20. Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 5:04 am Post subject: |
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In Space Junkie, there's quite a bit of dissonance between the pad/gated arp and the lead/bass. The melody isn't bad, but it's a good idea to vary the song more with different melodies, breaks and builds. Space Junkie just goes along with the beat coming and going, the song itself has very little form at all. But the first thing you should focus on is getting better samples, because the kick is very weak.
I don't know how long you've been making music so don't take any offense, but if you're trying to submit your current music to DDR/ITG, that's not realistic. |
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Evil_pied Trick Member
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21. Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:23 pm Post subject: |
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The dissonance is intended and in my opinion, the song doesn't suffer because of it. Also, if I was to submit space junkie to ITG it would be a shortened version probably featuring the intro, the bridge section and the rest of the song after the bridge. So, variety wouldn't be a problem in my opinion.
Also, space junkie isn't one of my better songs. You should listen to the remixes I made of it. You'd probably be more impressed with them. |
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Kyrandian Trick Member
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Evil_pied Trick Member
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23. Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 5:14 pm Post subject: |
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Well, I've been making more music, and I think I'm improving.
Newest song. |
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Evil_pied Trick Member
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24. Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 10:17 pm Post subject: |
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There's new music on my myspace if anyone's interested. |
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kaosskratchet Trick Member
Joined: 01 Nov 2005 Location: Durham, North Carolina |
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