So Deep

dlm · Trick Member Joined: 16 Jan 2004 Location: Columbus, OH

So I've officially fallen into DDR nerd-dom. I was listening to So Deep (Perfect Sphere Mix) before bed because I just happen to think it's a really, really beautiful track and it's the next cata I want to learn for the arcade. So anyway, while I was listening to it, I started writing an away message and this poem came out of it... figured I'd post it here. I'm sure at least one person can relate to it.

So deep
So beautiful
So long
But I never forget...

Here I stand now, still today
As if it all was yesterday
Leaving everyone afraid
But still I am here

So deep inside your heart I saw
So beautiful the sight
So long it's been since last I heard
But still I can't forget

So deep inside your soul I fell
So beautiful the sound
So long since I have heard of love
But I remember still

Do I regret?
Do I despair?
Do I run away?

If I could lose the memories
Would I cast them away?

I can't forget the things I've lived
For they're why I'm alive
I can't regret the things I've done
They made me who I am

Still the feeling lies
So deep inside my mind
And still, after my whole life fades
I will not forget.

Hope this is the right forum. Also, anybody know if this is a KO? I was under the impression that it was, but a friend told me it was a license. Can anybody confirm that?

DJ sephi spin those discs · Trick Member Joined: 16 Sep 2003 Location: Austin, TX

it is not a KO.
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gL.Karl · Trick Member Joined: 27 Jan 2004

Too cliched :\
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Dance_More · Trick Member Joined: 18 Nov 2002 Location: Winchester,VA

That's a pretty good poem...though i'm no good at poems i still had to learn about them for a year

so i have some advice...i think you should change the last line in the second, third and fourth stanzascause it doesn't flow with the poem and it makes it kinda choppy

Kissably sweet · Trick Member Joined: 05 Mar 2002 Location: Riverside, CA

I thought it was a great poem!

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Pantera · Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 9:11 am Post subject:

It's pretty good, but I don't consider anything in free verse to be poetry.

And, yes, So Deep is a cool song

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Misaki's Midnite Blaze · Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 9:56 am Post subject:

That's actually a pretty good poem...I like it

Anyone care to sing it during So Deep?

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AFAD · Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 10:46 am Post subject: So Deep

That was a pretty good poem.
But I don't really think that you can sing that while you are doing the song can u?
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Jeff's Bawls · Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 7:03 pm Post subject:

kch · Trick Member Joined: 21 Jul 2002 Location: houston/austin

IIRC, silvertear = ian van dahl. so deep and its various official remixes are the only songs he does under that pseudonymn
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Pantera · Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 7:03 am Post subject:

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DDRedemption · Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 10:57 am Post subject: ian van dahl info

actually, the only female in the group (annemie coenen) is just the singer and face of the entire group. if it had to come down to gender specifics, the name would be labeled as a 'he', because of the two founders christophe chantzis and erik vanspauwen. together with two other producers, they form a group of five titled ian van dahl.
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kch · Trick Member Joined: 21 Jul 2002 Location: houston/austin

well shit. learn something new every day.
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DDRTRANCEDANCER · Basic Member Joined: 13 Feb 2004 Location: VISALIA

So deep
So beautiful
So long [/quote]

hu..that doesnt sound right

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Mysterio · Trick Member Joined: 20 Nov 2002 Location: Aiken, SC

What!? Ian Van Dahl is Silvertear? Well I guess that's why there is So Deep and Will I? on Max 2 US...but unfortunately the quality of Will I? is now reflected unto So Deep which, by my logic, means one of my favorite songs is now garbage...sigh. Goodbye So Deep.

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dlm · Trick Member Joined: 16 Jan 2004 Location: Columbus, OH

Tsuka18 · Trick Member Joined: 15 Apr 2003 Location: Houston, Texas

Wa-what? Whats wrong with his songs? Whats wrong with Will I? Its a good song IMO....... and So Deep is an even greater song but still, even though you think Will I? is bad-- just because theyre both made by the same group doesnt mean So Deep is bad as well....

(or vyse versa)
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Vicky · Basic Member Joined: 12 Feb 2004

Oh God, I love So Deep!! I almost cry when I listen to it...

it's a very emotional song....
But wait, Ian V D is Silvertear?? But... how? I mean, why the different name and stuff..

Poetic Abyss · Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2004 10:47 pm Post subject:

Does it matter? In reality, everyone is really just Naoki, for he is what all DDR music sprung from

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