Freestyle DDR rap forum!

Yojimbo! · Trick Member Joined: 20 Oct 2003 Location: Tyler, Texas

Well, DDR is my thing, but I aslo love to freestyle. No, not on the DDR machine, with lyrics. So, who's up for an all original rap lyrics freestyle battle? It's not my style to go first, I like to humiliate others who go before me, so I'll wait. Here's the rules:

Keep it remotely clean: Limit yourself to around 10 swears, alright? And uh, no perverted crap either.

Keep it short: We don't need an epic ballad, 200 pages long! So, leave it around 2 pages max.

Keep it on the suject: The first one to begin chooses the subject. We all must stay on the same subject.

Make it good: Don't just act like an ignoramus...There's already enough in the world. Be serious with it, okay?

The crowd decides: When you are done, I will rate it fairly, and it will count as 2 votes. Then, the crowd goes in and says who they think won the battle, each of theirs counting as 2 votes as well. If someone is undecided, one vote goes to each person. I will announce the winner, and the winner will be allowed to keep on going.

A prize (yay!): You will not only be called the best DDRfreak.com rap battler, but you will also get a DDR Extreme Soundtrack! Yay! I'll contact the winner at the end of it all, okay? Second place...I don't know...I'll try to get a DDR Related prize in there somehow.

Hysterical BreAkdown · Trick Member Joined: 08 Oct 2003 Location: Severn, Md

heh, ill give it a try, threads blank so far

Rhythm pounding through the dance floor,
beads of sweat dripping but the people want more.
No time to stop, no chance to rest,
nows the time to prove whos the best.
Heavy bass starts to flow.
sets of 3 arrows in a row
signs of fatigue start to show,
but only two songs left to go.

Now a little bit of dance this time
Chaos dishin out new age rhyme.
turned around, blind to the steps
memory kicks in from previous reps
hands hit the floor,
up goes your score,
slam you feet down and spin round once more.
legs are sore,
but you won the war.
Opponents know you showed them the door.
-K.L.
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- Kevin L.

Yojimbo! · Trick Member Joined: 20 Oct 2003 Location: Tyler, Texas

Good theme. Overall, i'd say it's about a 8 out of ten. Good vocabulary, decent flow, but the end could use updating. Example:

Show the competition how to truly burn the floor

Show the competition more than they asked for

Great though. Thanks for the post!
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MattScott · Trick Member Joined: 24 Jan 2002 Location: Lakeville, MA

Uh. What.

You can't freestyle type, yo. What.

Dance to the Dance to the Rev to the lution,
I'm spazzing on the floor like I'm in electrocution
cause I'm hip to the groove and makin' my move
and I'm dancing to jazz, hip-hop and fusion
On a metal stage in front of my fans
the way I do in front of you my mic in my hand
I play it all day like I rock it all night
and I battle other dancers all across the land
with my moves, y'all, and you know it's true
the freaky funky smooth steps I'm busting on you
I give it my all and you know I'll never fall
I'm the ultimate soft with the comfortable shoe
You'll lose, if you step to me
you put your quarter in and you might as well leave
cause you're not as hot as you think, big shot
I'll be racking up those perfects like you wouldn't believe, yo.

Word.
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Hysterical BreAkdown · Trick Member Joined: 08 Oct 2003 Location: Severn, Md

Yo think yo bad cuz u got some rhyme
lemme putcha' in yo place one last time
the way i speak you cant handle this
I crush your perfect with a marvelous!!
Electrocution? Theres no shock
your shakin cuz my words make your body rock
You think you can stand your ground?
ill drop you on your back with a whole new sound!

Ya wanna show me up? Step up to the pad
ive seen your "funky smooth" and its, at best, sad
You know im the best, man, face the facts
Imma be a lengend more famous then MaxX
ill bet you freeze when the feet show 10
Just back away, chicken out again.
I own your jazz, hip-hop, and fusion,
I move to techno while your still snoozen'
I tear up trance and Euro beat too,
I mastered Jap Pop and Rhythm and Blue.
If you think you got a few tricks up your sleeve
besta show them now while you still can breathe!
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Max's Period · Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2003 11:02 am Post subject:

The second I get on the stage
I feel like realeasing all my rage
Left, Right, up, down, it's all in the flow
When I Start movin' i need to move some mo'.
Dance Dance Revolution is thy name
dancin' to the beat is the game
whether to have fun or to compete
you'll always find you'rself groovin' to the beat.

More to come...

MattScott · Trick Member Joined: 24 Jan 2002 Location: Lakeville, MA

Hysterical BreAkdown · Trick Member Joined: 08 Oct 2003 Location: Severn, Md

sad you call me lame, i OWN the dance game.
Besta not try to stomp on my fame.
If my rhymes are bad, ill take the fall
but why dont you look what you rhymed with "all"
Let the people decide, they know their stuff,
ud better hope the journey home's not rough

i dont feel like checking the thread so damn much
im done, Im gonna play Guilty Gear and such . . .
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MattScott · Trick Member Joined: 24 Jan 2002 Location: Lakeville, MA

Freestyle does not NEED to have a concrete rhyme scheme as far as I know. I did the limerick sht the first time because it's fun and different. I didn't rhyme all for four lines because it didn't flow as well...the carriage returns were wrong. read it over again like one big line.

Shake my hand, dammit. You know who won.
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DJ_QUACKQUACK · Trick Member Joined: 07 Mar 2003

lemme break i down with some old school for ya':

hotel, motel, holiday Inn (say what)
I say if that fool can't DDR, hell no, he aint my friend

Mark · Trick Member Joined: 03 Jun 2002 Location: San Diego, CA

Oh snaps it's Piq on Niq Ver. DDR!

Hysterical BreAkdown · Trick Member Joined: 08 Oct 2003 Location: Severn, Md

Project: J-ko · Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2003 11:38 pm Post subject:

How do you do this without a beat going? Hmm...must steal beat to put in my head...

My rap's hideous! And my name is J-ko!
Rap is to me like burning is to down in Waco
Texas, Dividian Disaster
Ignorant masses, I AM YOUR MASTER!
Listen up, I got something to tell you now!
So step up, and line up like the army now
LEFT, RIGHT, LEFT, just like you were Captain Jack
Crazier than Prozac, deadly as a heart attack,
FREESTYLE! And Boogie on the DDR!
(Didja notice how I ripped off Super Star?)
Stand back, and issue me your compliment
For this Dance Dance Revolution Tournament
Freestyle Rap! Listen how you hype it ,
I'll hand you your ass, and leave you to wipe it
I'm done makin' rhymes, this is silly as a goose.
I concede to the REAL rhyme master, Dr. Suess!

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Zukin-Man · Trick Member Joined: 25 Nov 2002 Location: War Agony

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Wolfman2000 · Trick Member Joined: 02 Jul 2003 Location: Somewhere in NC

J-ko gets my 2 points.

Yojimbo! · Trick Member Joined: 20 Oct 2003 Location: Tyler, Texas

Your boring old bull crap, ain't really got jack, just words you throw
down, trying to win yourself a soundtrack,
Not that I mind, I like a joke, and your wimpy rhymes are getting smoked by the minute, I'd say there's a fire, but there's no fire in it, I'd say you should give up because there's no way you'll win it, but I'm enjoying myself, I'm reveling in it, cause this'll never end if you never begin it,
So before my say's finished, I'll take out my rhymes and spin it, but for now, you don't deserve it, your preformance sucks, so I'll say I never heard it, ha.
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Yojimbo! · Trick Member Joined: 20 Oct 2003 Location: Tyler, Texas

Your boring old bull crap, ain't really got jack, just words you throw
down, trying to win yourself a soundtrack,
Not that I mind, I like a joke, and your wimpy rhymes are getting smoked by the minute, I'd say there's a fire, but there's no fire in it, I'd say you should give up because there's no way you'll win it, but I'm enjoying myself, I'm reveling in it, cause this'll never end if you never begin it,
So before my say's finished, I'll take out my rhymes and spin it, but for now, you don't deserve it, your preformance sucks, so I'll say I never heard it, ha.
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Request Lock · Trick Member Joined: 12 Feb 2003

Yojimbo tried but got owned by the Ko
so just sit back and let your colors show
Freestyle dancer, malfunction slick
I'm dropping heavy, you're failin trick
Puttin maxx like what, 300 bpm
when you try to rhyme it's more like a sin
Got beats like Naoki, speed like omega
Yojimbo's a game gear, i'm like sega!
Got rhymes like trance, funk and electronic
i'm up to speed just like my name was sonic
Now you listen to my music it's political scheme
but you mother frick couldn't last in my scene
Half in plugs and a spike in my lip
If i was a trendy i'd be freakin hip
I'm white ok, got a mohawk too
i might be a poser, but how bout you?
"I've seen 8 mile a million times!
I can't believe the way Rabbit rhymes
i wish i live in the inner city
so i could be cool with the nitty gritty
So i'm gonna go live in a trailor
become a millionaire and get a tailor"
maybe you should quit while yo buttocks is ahead
cuz you're wasting money like i'm watching Judge Dredd
Stomp to my beat, i'm the double step king
but when you try to battle mode you ain't got a thing
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MattScott · Trick Member Joined: 24 Jan 2002 Location: Lakeville, MA

I just love those trance and electronic rhymes.
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